Hi everyone! Recently our class just finished our Visual Poem project and the purpose of it was to write a poem about us that expresses us and then film and take pics if it. My poem is about music and my love for it. The visuals that I used for this is myself playing the piano and pictures of my sheet music that I use. The visuals relate to what Im saying when I recite my poem because I talk about music and hands touching the keyboard and thats what you see.
I guess I like my project but I used my moms camera to film all the b-roll and there is no way to focus it so my b-roll is pretty blurry. Also I kinda rushed on this project so Im not that happy about it. Next time I'll check out one of Mr. Sanderls cameras so I have better quality imagery and be aware of how much time I have to finish this project. Overall I guess Im pretty satisfied waith the result of my project.
All though the b-roll wasn't that good I still tried to make it look interesting by putting lots of different and cool effects. I used the crop tool, Ken Burnz effect, transformation tool, text layovers, and color correct which helped with the problem a bit. The Ken Burnz effect made the pictures that I used in my project more interesting to look at because it would pan across the image and zoom in and out of it. The transformation and crop tool made the image either just show a certain part of it or transform it into a different way to look at that pic or video. The color correction made the imagery more eye popping.
I love your own music playing in the background!
ReplyDeleteSome of your shots were repetitive and not very professional looking.
I love your poem itself, it's so pretty!
I like the music playing in the background
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of piano you need more music
I like how you show the music sheet
That's some great background music! Did you do that yourself?
ReplyDeleteThere's a little bit of black at the end.
I really liked how the lyrics rhymed.
•You can play the piano pretty well
ReplyDelete•Some of the video was kinda shaky
•I like the noise in the a-roll
1. I love the video that shows you playing the piano
ReplyDelete2. More shots not only the piano
3. I love the music, its calm and peaceful
I like the piano in the background
ReplyDeleteThe voice overs are rushed
I really like the B-roll of you playing the piano
Its very well written
ReplyDeleteThere could be more b-roll of you playing the piano
your natural sound was really good
Great text layovers
ReplyDeleteThe music just stops at one point
I love the part where you show the cords
Your rhyme scheme is really cool and creative
ReplyDeleteThere are a few jump cuts in the music
The way you put your feelings and emotions into your words is really cool
I like the piano sounds but,
ReplyDeletethe sounds were a little too loud
I like all the great shots of you playing the piano
You can play the piano good!!!
ReplyDeleteMaybe you can talk slower.
I just love the b-roll
I like how your poem stops and then you say the rest at the end
ReplyDeleteThere could have been more B-roll of you playing the piano
You poem was written really well
I love the creative idea of using your own music for the music requirement!
ReplyDeleteThe B-Roll was kind of blurry.
I loved the Ken Burns effect you used on the sheet music!
I love the songs! You got great quality and i really like cannon.
ReplyDeleteNo complaints
Great job on the voice over!
Very good B-roll of you showing yourself playing the piano of the side.
ReplyDeleteThe music can go a little bit more down.
Awesome with the sheet music.
I absolutely love the beautiful piano music!
ReplyDeleteThe thing I would improve is probably to include some more diverse B-Roll, so there is some more variety.
Also I really like the subtitle and effect with the title to one of the pieces you played.
I liked the music you made it sounds good
ReplyDeleteI couldn't hear some parts
Overall interesting
I like how the music and the voice overs like go together in perfect harmony
ReplyDeleteMost of the videos were playing the piano maybe you could've got more videos of something different
I liked the shot you got of the music sheet and how you explained what happened